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Prince Charming

He has ocean blue eyes which often turns red and He's the vampires' king
Straight hair as black as a raven's wing
Falling on a pale handsome face,so silent, He moves without a thud
His long fangs are always dripping with blood
The look of pure evil sparkles in His eyes
He is the one that everyone fears
He feels as cold as death
And robs me of my breath
The cool sylables of His name
Echoing in my head everyday,since a vampire i became
He took lives of the innocent
Just because of their blood's scent
He drank every drop of it
And never will He quit

 

 

 

 

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  • okadadokie
    March 26, 2007

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    Wow, sounds like a real hunk. Perfect guy for both of us, don't you think? Vampires rock. Wicked sweet write.

    ~Oka/KC


  • shutter-bug
    March 25, 2007

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    interesting write. definately unique in that i haven't received an entry like it. nice work. thank you for entering!!