step back for a sec
and think about what you want
take a look at me
standing here
waiting
for you
knowing
i love you
(i meant it when i told you)
(did you?)
sometimes i think
i know you
enough
and sometimes
i think
you know me
too well
what do you think
what do you want
from me
you know you're past your deadline
do i have to do everything around here?
(cuz i will)
(but only if you want me to)
Author notes
i'm 15
A contest entry
- love poems (13yrs-18yrs) by Shacadia Shay.
390 points, ended May 3, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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good poem, please put your age in the author comments & if you could please don't use chat lingo in your poems in future contests of mine. other then that this is a good poem & was simple to read & relate to. best of luck in your love life & in my contest.
--Blessed be--
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okay thanks but where did i use chatspeak?
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ok i no its easy to do it by accident
(cuz i will) should be (cause i will)
sorry for being picky but if it were a one of the other peoples contest that i've entered in the past they would of really hassled you.
--Blessed be--
Dark Princess Vampire
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nice job!
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