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All That I Am

Like an open book
I stand willingly
Seducing your aura
And breathing your desire

I seek guidance

My yearning intensifies
Escalating
The essence of tranquility
Of a wholesome world

I bear no grudges

I am open
For all to read
Seducing your aura
Breathing one last breath

Giving all that I have












Author notes

Option no: 8..."Rules? What rules?"

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  • Mingan Tzar Avarus
    April 17, 2007

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    This poem, sadly is not to my tastes, some may like it, others may not, I'm one of the latter, thank you for your entry however. ~Corey~


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    March 25, 2007

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    very fitting of the picture, your piece flows well and makes a very creative use of the language. nicely done.
    Rory


  • Scrunter
    March 25, 2007

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    Wow, tottally different from your other work but I really liked it. The title takes on the picture so well. This is a talented piece of work you have penned here Kym. Good job.

  • Mingan Tzar Avarus
    March 25, 2007
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    Thanks for your entry and good luck