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I hate myself. i'm sorry

The metal wire strained across my teeth.
The ugliness of it all.
Pushing more hatred for myself,
Waiting for me to fall.

No colors for comfort,
No hiding this flaw,
Right there in my face,
No closing the door.

I feel so inadequate,
So dumb, so small,
In this world of beauty,
There's no way to stand tall.

I don't fit the sequence.
Perfect teeth, perfect hair.
Perfect anything, not me.
Life's just not fair.

This is all so stupid.
I should be happy with myself.
This ridiculous poem,
Pitying myself.

How selfish,
How dumb,
Are these feelings to you?
I hate myself.

I'm sorry.

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Just a write. may be true may not be. breaking free from writers block thanks to Phoenix7289.

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  • Sweet Jane
    June 20, 2007

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    very sad:m*smile*

    This is a great poem.
    don't hate yourself
    be happy be proad
    and be stroug.
    please beleive in yourself.
    Love your friend
    Meagan:kiss*

  • sneakers
    March 25, 2007

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    Hey! Sorry that your feeling down, but having braces isn't all that bad. just think about the beautiful smile you'll have when it's all done. that's what i did. hope all is well
    sneakers


    • Tear-Stained-Heart
      March 25, 2007
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      Thanks

      thanks for the comment. this poem was just from nothing really, yeah i have days when i feel like this but this poem just slipped into my mind because my brace keeps cutting my lip so it was annoying me lol. thanks again for the comment.
      ~Tear~

  • Time focus on Me
    March 25, 2007

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    Great

    Sis dont feel that your by your self bc your not. I once had brace and greasy hair too. your not by your self I know where your coming from and how ya feel. I felt this same way, and to be honest with ya sometimes I still feel that way my self even without the braces and greasy hair. No ya poem isnt ridiculous u expressin how ya feel and what your feeling this poem is great. I have told myself so mny times that I hate my self as well,but pls dont hate ya self. Your a wonderful person and a friend as wel sista. your a great person. So No dont hate ya self. Well, I am gonna go u take care sis ya need anyone I'm here for ya. thks for bein here for me as wel. hope thngs get betta for ya. hugs to ya

    • Tear-Stained-Heart
      March 25, 2007
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      Thanks

      thanks for the comment sis. things are going well actually, just wrote this because my brace was annoying me and some feelings i've had in the past. Thanks again
      ~Tear~


  • Moon baby lulla bye
    March 25, 2007
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    i know how you feel. i hate myself too. i have the braces and acne and greasy hair so your not alone. and dont ever think your alone all kids feel this way at one time. anyway your poem was pretty good. but you dont have to hate yourself. keep it up.

    • Tear-Stained-Heart
      March 25, 2007
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      Thanks

      yeah i guess most kids do, not feeling to bad about myslef but my brace kept cutting my lip so i took out my anger in this poem hehe. thanks for your comment.

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