Sorry, i messed up big,
I need you here,
I miss you,
I want you,
I love you.
No excuses its not fair,
I left you in fear,
I'm sorry,
I need you here,
I love you.
I let him get to me,
I left you alone,
I'm sorry,
I need you here,
I love you
I want you back.
I know it's too late.
I'm sorry,
I need you here,
I love you.
Please tell me what you think
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really cool poem:b
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this is really good i feel for you hope things worked themselves out and everything keep writing j
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Thanks
thanks for the comment, yeah thing will work out, just needed a moan i guess, hehe. Thanks again.
~Tear~
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GOrgeous
Hey sis havent talked to ya in a while, This poem is a alsome poem i loved reading it and know how ya feel with this poem u did an amazin job in the way you expressed your self alsome job sis wonderful and great expressed full of heart and feelin all the way with this poem Wow! I love these lines to the poem
I let him get to me,
I left you alone,
I'm sorry,
I need you here,
I love you
I want you back.
I know it's too late.
I'm sorry,
I need you here,
I love you.
Alsome sis keep da ink flowin and I hope things are going okay for ya if ya need someone to talk to i am here for ya. Well, I betta go Bravo with this poem
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AWESOME!
This was actually really good! One of those small ones that is like a hand reaching out of the computer and grabbing you to something... it grabs your attention!!! GREAT WRITE!!! I liked how you described your feelings! Good job!!!
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Thanks
thanks. it really isn't that good but thanks anyway
it's nice to know people like your work.
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