To possess the capability
of feeling something beautiful,
is an indication that you are too.
of feeling something beautiful,
is an indication that you are too.
Author notes
I felt like writing something short! This goes out to people who judge other's solely on their appearance. There's so much more...
A contest entry
- Titles For Everyone!!! by AllYoullNeverHave.
450 points, ended April 13, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wods speak in volumes


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For so few words this is amazing and so true. This is beautiful.
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This is beautiful. It has so much depth in such a few lines. Well done on this wonderful poem and congratulations for the honorable winner.
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Awesome!!!
Love your thinnking!!!


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wow who knew 3 little line could pack that much punch! that is really beautiful thought to put out there.

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Ohhh, this was pretty profound! I loved it
You should enter this in another contest if you see one out there where it meets requirements, inspiring message! Congrats on your shiney and this was certainly my pleasure to read
~Tia


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In an odd way I kind of understand this. It's something my ex used to say to me.
I don't know really what to say to this except that's a really sweet short poem and I like it alot. But then again I always liked your poems, so thats kind of an understatement.
Anyways keep up the good work.


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hmm. i dont know this is a whole lot different from what i am used to reading by you. but good luck in the contest...
it seems like forever since i have talked to you!
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So true!!! What a wonderful poem. If one feels beautiful inside it shows on the outside. Beauty comes from within first! Well done.

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Beautiful write. Yes, true beauty comes from within. As a society we need to look past how others look and try to focus more on how they act and treat other people. Best of luck in the contest.
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This is so true... there is so much more than just what lies on the outside... In my opinion beauty should be based on what lies in the heart and soul. Good job. Very short but very true and strong. The message is very clear. Great job! Thanks for entering. Good luck.
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How true! We tend to look on the outward appearances of so many. Jealous of whta they possess. Strange that looking into their inner beauty we find none. But self contempt, a darker side. Inner beauty comes from within and radiates outward in so many that are merely passed over. Sad, but so true. Well penned. Good luck in your contest. ~Sie


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Great
Yes so true ... if all you see is dark then I guess only dark you will attract.
Message put across well in so few lines
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