Eyes
reflect all that is
from sorrow to intense joy
more than the windows to the soul
they echo the past
while seeking the future
(c) Debby Sorensen Carlson
3/25/2007
A contest entry
- WORDS... QUICKIE CONTEST... by Harrisham Minhas.
300 points, ended March 26, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hoodwinked!
This is a great piece that shows the way our eyes reflect everything we feel.
Great choice of words
Shari
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intense accurate view of a difficult subject, how we see or not
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John
Thank you John.. Hope you are having a great day. Debby
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Wonderfully written.
Thanks for your entry. Good luck in my contest!
Be Serene,
Spread Peace,
Harrisham Minhas.
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Great Poem
Good morning Debby, Your poem is lovely. You have written such beautiful imagery in these few lines. Best of luck my friend. Blessings to you and yours!!! You take care, Sandy
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Sandy
Thank you so much ! Blessings. Debby
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Awesome write with such stiff restrictions, sounds like an excellent challenge to me. You have done a terrific job. Good luck in the contest.
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freespirit
THank you so very much. Blessings. Debby
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When I was 7 or 8, my godfather (who is an amazing poet) wrote a book of poems for me entitled Dreamheads Talking. This strikes me as something that belongs in that book. I know that may not mean much to you, but it means a lot to me. Your poem is excellent and rather hopeful.
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Carrot
It does mean alot to me.. thank you so much. Blessings.. d
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