You claim to know me
You claim to be my friend
You claim that you love me
Yet in the end you use me up
I told you I would be there for you
I told you that I loved you
I told you I'd never forget you
Then you screwed me over and I forgotten about you
I hate you with such a passion
Even if I had my way with you
I still couldn't do what you deserve
Because dang it I still love you
I donno what it is about you
I donno why I still love you
I donno why I even care
But that is just who I am!
I was there for you every day
I was there for you every night
I was there for you anytime you needed me
But in the end you just used me for who I am
I love who I am
I am a sweet lovable guy
I deserve better than you
But deep down inside I still love you
I donno why my life sucks
I donno why the things I do happen
I donno why I live the way I do
But one thing is for sure I can change
I changed to be a good person
I changed cuz I did not like who I was
I changed cuz I was a drug abuser who hated society
I changed because I know I am a better person than who you thought I was
Moral:
In the end we are only one person
We control who we are and how we act
We control how our life will be like
But in the end no one ultimately decides who and what we become
Author notes
UGH! I been wanting to write that forever and it took me to be extremely pissed off and having a rough day to do! whitetigerlover4eva aka formerly known as whitetiger1251
A contest entry
- For Oboebaybee's faves only! by in-the-twilight.
600 points, ended April 1, 2007, 13 entries
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Awwww Sad
Lifes storms are difficult for anyone,the main goal is to get through them not let them get through you.A heart full of hurt that needs mending.Sadness is a force to overtake us and it does its best at all times.You have penned just that in a very painful way.
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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great poem
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You are correct.
You are correct when you say that you are responsible for your choices. This made for a very interesting piece to read. It is almost song like but with a moral to it. -
Paul, this is a wonderful poem/rant, I too have felt these same things before in my life, hurts like Hell, but it does make us stronger and better people, keep up the good work and Good luck!
Mum
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Thanks for entering daddy... I felt this was actually really good! Thanks bunchos! Good luck in the contest! Rock on! xxoo Meg
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I am glad.
I am glad that you did write it because hopefully it will help you feel better. Yes we make choices in our lives and those choice influence who we become with God's help. I agree we have to let off steam, sometimes when I start to write things that I did not even know were there come out. Sometimes it is angry and others I wonder at the muse in me. So I would say that you did the same.
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It's good to let off steam Paul by writing about whatever is bothering you. You were always good at vent poems lol.
As far as being used, it all comes down to the user thinking only of themselves. It's ironic, because I've seen it so many times where the user uses someone, thinking they will benefit from it, and in the end they lose a friend, and on top of that, the negative karma they created follows them around. But of course, you always hear them whine about their fate afterwards. And you're there saying to yourself "Duuhhhhhhh, wake up already user, you brought it upon yourself."
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great poem!
So much emotion!
Beautifully written, Paul and sometimes a bad day bring it all out (like the poem I just posted)
good luck in the contest! A pleasure to read!
Lynda
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Awesome
I absolutly loved reading it. Haven't read any of your materal in a long time and I must say that now I know what I've been missing. Keep up the good work bro!
-Lordviper
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