I walk alone
down crowded streets
a shadowed man
lost in dreams
A promise made
that binds my soul
I walk alone
'til I walk no more.
I walk alone
in darkened realms
where fallen sleep
and hopes abound
no wearied rest
do I recieve
I walk alone
while dreamers dream.
I walk alone
in life and death
I shall go on
'til vows are kept
one boy shall rise
then I will sleep
I walk alone
'til souls are reaped.
Author notes
poetsruletheworld
A contest entry
- Final Fantasy Fans...this Contest is for YOU!! by grrlshadow.
600 points, ended March 27, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So Auron, what's in the bottle?
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All hail that sexy tall dark and handsome man!
You are my new god.
You described Auron awesomely.
I love you too for doing a great job in telling a story of him.
I love him just as much as you.
*Sigh* He's so hot!
LOL Well done my friend you did great.
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Auron is also my favorite character of the FF characters and this poem fits him so perfectly. From the moment I started reading this piece, I knew who you were talking about and I like that about a poem. Wonderful work; one of my favorite ones of this topic
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This is a marvelous portrayal of Auron, I mean, it's right on - Perfection!! "I walk alone
in darkened realms
where fallen sleep
and hopes abound
no wearied rest
do I recieve
I walk alone
while dreamers dream." I'm not sure at which point I figured out that he was "Unsent" but it was pretty early on...this is great!! Thank you for entering this, and best of luck to you in the contest!!
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You certainly imbued the character with the breadth and depth of lonelieness,am unfamiliar with the character but he called to my heart with his sense of isolation from others and the lonelieness of one shadow
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miss2u
thanks i played final fantasy x until my fingers bled than played more lol...it was a great game and he was a great character.
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