My Doctor is one of a kind
For a better one I couldn't wish
For when I came in with a broken nose
He rubbed on it three swedish fish!
It was healed in less than a moment
Though on my nose was a sticky residue
But I really was thankful for my doctor
He always knows what to do!
Like when I came in to his office
Cuase my tight ring made my hand numb
He looked at my ring, said "I can remove that thing."
And did so with peppermint gum.
Or that time when I shattered my leg
When I landed wrong durring a leap.
He pulled something out of a colorful package
And healed my leg with a marshmallow peep.
I really do love my doctor.
He always treats me just fine.
So who is this doctor I speak of?
Why, it's doctor Wonkastein!
A contest entry
- A Spoonful Of Sugar by AliceinPoetryLand.
1850 points, ended April 9, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
^_^
Comments
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!
Your poem is just adorable. It has quality and character. It is very creative and has wonderful imagery. Congrats on your win there.
~Snappy~
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very sweet poem
lions have pride!
adorable tale here...too cute!
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Cuase my tight ring >you misspelled and this is the secondpoem Ive read about dr wonkastein> who or what is he? Good luck.
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Lions Have Pride!!
This was fantastic!! I love the humor in this one! I truly enjoyed the read. Best of luck in the contest. Keep that pen flowing. Thanks for sharing this humorous write with us.
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!!!!
LOL....this is great!!
A grammatical error here and there..but I sure did enjoy the read!
I hope to see more of your work as I sneak around AP ~
Keep your quill filled with fresh ink and let it flow!
Bear ~
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Lions Have Pride!
I enjoyed this write. I am in the same contest as you too and it's a cut, funny contest! I love the peppermint gum bit I thought that was really unique. Good luck in the contest.
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!
Yay, this is awesome!! It is so funny and original!! Great job.. I like the doctors name.. Well done and best of luck to you in the contest!
xAngelx4xLife
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Lions have Pride
Awwwww, this is so cute ♥
I wish I had Dr. Wonkastein as a doctor, My doctor just draws blood and makes me sit through so many tests. I hate needles...they make me bruise.
This poem is so cute, It's a great mood lifter.
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Lions Have Pride!
This is Adorable!!!
I got hungry just inhaling this verse~
and have a doctor's appointment today and actually look forward to it thanks to You
Enjoyed this one very much and loved the rhyme too~
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings to You!
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Lions have PRIDE
I wish I had DR. Wonkastein as a doctor! My doctor just gave me injections and medication!
This was such a sweet piece, I really enjoyed reading it
It was written like Mary Poppins, I could just hear it as a perky song
Well done, really enjoyable to read
Good luck in the contest
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!
I had a doctor like yours when I was a little girl
He would always bring a smile from out of my tears by saying such things as this...Oh I wish doctors were like it now...they don't seem to have time to spend even 5mins on you anymore...
This poem is a great mood lifter and has made me chuckle, you have an interesting imagination which helps when writing poetry...I think it is really hard to pen humour into poetry, but you have achieved that with ease here...well done, something I find so hard to do
Thanks for sharing this with us today, you have been spotlighted by a lion friend
Love and smiles...
~Lilac
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!
This is a very sweet poem. It has nice imagery and is very creative. You have a creative imagination. It was fun to read. Good luck to you in your contest.
~Snappy~
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lions have pride
wow, now that is cute and very good
great job, very good
Have a Wonkastein day
have a good day
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!
Thank you for the smiles this piece gave. I enjoyed reading and not knowing what was around the corner on this one.Thank you for sharing...GETS
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!
A very nice write. Imaginative. Like the humor. Good imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. Good feeling in this piece. Good word choice. Nice alliteration. A much enjoyed read.
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE
Absolutely great! So much fun, creative, good rhyme, please IM me your doctor's number lol! What a great idea!
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!!
No fair! My doctor never even gave lollipops! Sounds like your doctor's got the best cure around. Thanks for sharing this upbeat poem with us. It made me smile >pixxie<
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Lions Have Pride!!
This is great!!! I really needed the smile this morning and well, found it in this fun filled piece. Thanks for giving me that smile. Best of luck in the contest!! Keep that pen flowing.
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!
This is great...gave me a big smile. I wish my doctors were all that cool. 
I never knew marshmallow peeps were such good medicine, but now that I do know, I'll be sure to stock up! lol (Good thing Easter is right around the corner and they are easy to find. )
Best wishes and good luck,
~J.
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!
How adorable! LOL
Such a cheery and hilarious poem!
This would brighten anyone's day
It was a pleasure to read
Lynda
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Sounds like the sort of Doctor I'd like to see. Except maybe for the fishy cure well done and good luck
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Full of Smiles
Very cute and creative. Thank you for entering. Good luck in the contest
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Lol very well done indeed This was very clever and gave me a good laugh.
Thank you for sharing these in our contest.
Gaylene
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