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Promise Me

In spite of everything,
I'm still holding strong.
I won't let go,
I can't give up.
It wasn't a part
Of our plan.

I'll wait...
As long as it takes,
As much as it hurts...
I'll wait.

I know in my heart
We're meant for eachother.
Things may be tough,
I'll admit it.
It's a huge obstacle,
But we WILL overcome it.

I feel it
Deep within,
It's embedded
Inside.

I've given you my all,
And I will continue to do so.
Nothing will stop our love,
It's far too strong.

Though now it seems
Almost unbearable,
The pain will subside.

Friends for the moment,
But soulmates forever.

We'll get over this,
We'll move on,
And we'll love eternally.
I know this is true.

In spite of everything,
I'm still holding strong.
I won't let go,
I can't give up.

Promise me,
You'll do the same.

Author notes

i love jerry with all my heart, and time heals all wounds. as much as it kills me to be friends with him right now, i know thats how it *has* to be. we will be together again, though. no doubt in my mind

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  • OCDPolarBear
    March 29, 2008

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    this is a really emotional piece i can really relate to it, sweet write
    thanks heaps for your comment on my poem too, i really appreciate it


  • capricornpoet
    April 30, 2007
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    sad is parting

    A lot of emotions in your writing , sadness of love,


  • capricornpoet
    April 30, 2007
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    warm touch

    Hope is a road to better things to come as your poem says. A song was hiding in your poem.