I know I'm young
I know you probably dont believe me when I say
I know what true love feels like
I know the happiness it brings.
It brought a smile to my face,
one I never want to replace.
Just the thought of the name
brought me riches and fame.
The egerness to see that person
to talk
to hear their voice
to feel beautiful in a second.
The words
like pools
you could swim and swim
and forget the sun and the world even existed.
A warm feeling in my heart
one I never wanted to depart
like a warm spark
lighting the dark.
A feeling so grand
it'd make you forget everything
your imperfections
your life
If you think your ugly
you become beautiful
if you cant form a sentence
speeches come flying from your throat.
You begin to have a desire
to turn that spark into a fire
that will rise high
and never ever die.
And perhaps this feeling wont end
it will continue forever and always
and those three letter sentences
will be so much more than words.
True love rarely exists anymore
but when you find it
you cling to it
like a favorite item.
And if this feeling ends
your heart begins to rip
and tears come more freely than before
and you start to wonder;
was it me?
what did i do?
did they mean those three words?
how could this happen?
Your little snow globe world
turns upside down
your smile now a frown.
Love like a rose
the years your together the stem,
your bad times the thorns
the bud is the awakening of love
and the actual rose is love,
but like a rose;
love will die.
Thats why you cherish while its coming together.
Author notes
I dont know if this is what your looking for, but I like it for some reason and I hope you will too.
A contest entry
- The feeling of true love! by RetroPanda.
475 points, ended April 6, 2007, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I know I'm young
I know you probably dont believe me when I say
I know what true love feels like
I know the happiness it brings
If you think your ugly
you become beautiful
if you cant form a sentence
speeches come flying from your throat.
Love IT!!!!
AMAZING WRITE!!!
I can see why it won first place!!!
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awww this was such a great poem. I loved it so much. I know exactly what u mean when u fall in love, and when its taken from you. I aalso loved the fact u compared love to the rose. I love roses too =D haha. amazing write hun.
-kimberly


