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I pray you didn't get caught

So where have you been little lady
And have you been up to no good?
The message you left, was all shady
Just tell me, you know that you should!

Maybe you broke a nail or two
Or maybe you rode on a train
Maybe you had a dream to pursue
Or maybe you flew in a plane

Wherever you were, I just want to say
I thought of you often then not
I hope you had fun each night and day
And I pray you didn’t get caught!


Welcome home my friend

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Option 5) Write a Welcome Back Poem for Wolf Mistress. (New Writes ONLY)

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  • just-an-amateur
    April 6, 2007
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    Wonderful job, well deserving of the silver. Enjoyed the cat immensely. I have two and feel like when my family comes home they just give us a look as if to say and where have you been? Makes me feel like a kid who got caught after curfew and I'm too young to know how that feels yet. Aren't they so good at it? Again, excellent job!
    ~M~


  • Huntress silver member
    April 5, 2007
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    congratulations


  • LittleAnn
    April 5, 2007

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    This is a really funny and cute poem that was such a pleasure to read!
    I'm sure she appreciates this write, you did a great job with this.
    The rhyming and the rhythm were great in this piece.
    Keep up the great work!
    Annie


  • Sharcu silver member
    April 4, 2007

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    Hood-winked!

    I'm not familiar with this poet, but I can tell she's a good friend of your's and must be to deserve a poem like this. Humorous, entertaining, and good on the side of poetry. I liked the smooth rhyming and your creativity. Thanks for sharing!
    --Tim

    You've been hood-winked by a member of the Poetic Bandits!

    • FifthDove
      April 5, 2007
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      Hey there Tim I am winking right back at ya
      Thank you very muchDove*


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    April 4, 2007

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    OMG, this is hilarious, Dove. I bet she did all of this and more... isn't that what 'getting away' is all about??!! Getting away so we can do whatever scandelous things we want to and not have t worry about the folks back home knowing about it

    great poem and I love that cat... reminds me a little of my sis's (catz) cat, Boss.. he had an attitude, too.

    Good luck in the contest

    Darlene


  • queen Moderators member
    April 2, 2007

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    She has probably been off having some kind of great adventure and left us all here. Good luck in the contest


  • DecemberSun
    April 1, 2007
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    Welcome home my friend or.... you ditched me so I pissed in your shoe?


  • maa gold member
    March 31, 2007

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    it's comforting for me to see this little sparkle of humor return to your pen ...
    a really sweet little welcome-back-poem for wolf mistress ...
    love the kitty with the impatient tail beat ...


  • waydownuponjoy
    March 25, 2007
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    Great little poem ...

    Loved the pic that went with the poem! joy


  • catz Moderators member
    March 25, 2007

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    LOL!!! This is too funny She's going to love this. You always manage to come up with the coolest poems funny or serious, you do it every time

    This one is bound to make her feel welcome back home, and I love the picture with it

    Good luck in the contest


    Dee


  • countrybabe gold member
    March 25, 2007

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    Thank you

    Aww this is so cool. I am sure Wolf Mistress will love this. Thank you for your entry and for following the rules. Good luck.

    Keep writing

    Countrybabe


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    March 24, 2007

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    hehehehe

    good job she will get a chuckle....and so will the few who know the rest of the story....
    Good luck in the contest.
    xo
    Tasha

  • Huntress silver member
    March 24, 2007
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    Im sure she will love this when she gets back

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