Deoxygenize the world in with we strive to live in
suffocate.
Disasemble the life you die with and you get what you've always longed for
Freedom.
Was it a lack of words or lack of brain cells that caused him to leave?
Confusion?, or dissalusion?
Fueling the fire of someone elses sickness and hiding all the symptoms.
we've failed to rember if it was us who origonaly felt like this.
Tear up old love notes, destroy the past,
interigate ourselves to make us feel,
alive.
Only to put the peices back together, once again.
Buckle your belt.
Life doesn't drive you anywhere but she makes sudden stops.
Flying through the windsheild isnt fun anymore.
Distill the mind,
ease the body into belive that it actually matters,
follow the yellow brick road
down the rabbit hole
only to emerge from a moldy closet full of tattered coats and moth balls.
He wasn't yours after all
Author notes
♥ dancing on your grave ♥ option 1
A contest entry
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Your definition of words is really different..It is unique and different to read!
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u really like this. its different. good luck
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Kool!!
Like the imagery alot!!
Thanks for entering my contest..& Best of Luck
GloriousGift
Heba -
Liked the second last verse especially - kind of sums it all up very nicely -did you mean believing that it actually matters in the second line of that verse? A few other typos, that if corrected, would make this poem read much better - old love notes, interrogate ourselves to, remember etc.
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yah..sorry i think this is one of the ones i typed faster than i should of and forgot to look for typos, either that or i had my nails done >.< thank you for the comment..i wil go back and fix the typos
<3 krisis..
much appriciated
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good
A little more towards the dark side, but I'm dark minded. I see how you feel
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