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little poem

they say time and space are curved...
so is my mind...
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  • Mythtress
    April 17, 2007
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    Beautiful!

    I love your little poem! congrats on the gold. write on, poet.

  • Paradise Prisoner
    April 17, 2007
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    i really love short powerful poems. and this is one.

  • Samplette gold member
    April 16, 2007

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    A very nicely done piece of poetry. You convey the written word with a dramatic touch. I like the way you present this write. Best to you in the contest.
    Sam