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With you, I am so beautiful !!!

Your heart, so pure, so full of love to give.

 

 

Your  Thoughtful

 

 

Tender

 

 

Faithful

 

 

Loyal

 

 

Your Commitment to us shows in your eyes.

 

 

You let me be who I am

 

 

You want only the best for me

 

 

Yet you strive to make me more ...

 

 

You take me above the clouds

 

 

You make me feel so beautiful ...

I am smitten to the core.

 

 

You make me want to be what you wish me to be ...

not just for you ...

 

 

You taught me to put "Me" first

 

 

You hold the best place ...

deep within my soul

 

 

Your song beats within my heart for only me to hear ...

telling me

 

"Your beautiful,

Your wonderful,

Your just that Damm Good!"

 

 

Your with me ...

In my eyes, my heart and my soul.

 

 

Without you, I could stand now alone ...

 

 

Only, with you

 

 

hand in hand

 

 

heart to heart

 

 

I become so much more!!

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Thank you to my Big Sister aka: PrincessGloria for the beautiful photo!! *option Love

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  • Bob Fox
    April 13, 2007
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    Soaring love

    Way above the clouds... There is the love you speak of. Passion & tenderness. Wonderful

  • Liquid memories
    March 25, 2007

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    touching for sure.

    I could feel the love flowing here and that is a beautiful thing. I had only one sister, and she died some time ago, from cancer, and still i miss her. she was my mother, in many ways. Thanks for sharing.


  • ShInE45DoWn
    March 25, 2007

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    Nice.

    Oops. I hit Enter.
    This is a cute poem :] Whoever this is to is lucky to have someone who thinks so highly.
    Nice write and good luck
    shinE*

  • ShInE45DoWn
    March 25, 2007
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    Nice.


  • Princess-Gloria
    March 24, 2007

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    Wow !!!!!

    Well Sis you did it again, You are a great poetess
    I want to be as good as you someday
    This is truly awesome.......
    So much love and beautiful feelings here.
    Keep it up
    Your Sis Gloria


  • Cyanide Angel gold member
    March 24, 2007
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    what a lovely poem

    i love the word choice...its just so fitting and i loved how you portrayed the feeling! awesome!


  • rustynite silver member
    March 24, 2007
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    we all think we can walk alone. it just dont work that way and still love.


    • Jadeheart 41
      March 24, 2007
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      So true my friend!! Thank you for for your comment! It is always nice to see you!

  • Lisa Haslett
    March 24, 2007

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    Good Poem

    Hi This is Lisa And that is a beautiful poem lovely choice of words.And good meaning to all of it!I loved it!Lisa K Haslett Raytown Missouri!


    • Jadeheart 41
      March 24, 2007
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      Thank you my friend!!

      Nice to meet you Lisa!! Thank you for reading my work ... may I add you to my favorites? would love to read yours as well!


  • Debbysmiles gold member
    March 24, 2007

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    What a beautiful loving piece. It would be a wonderful world if everyone loved like this. Blessings. Debby


    • Jadeheart 41
      March 24, 2007
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      Debby, you always have such loving comments for my writes! It is nice to know I have such a wonderful friend and admire yours as well!


  • Talking Toni gold member
    March 24, 2007

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    Tender!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    The love shown in this piece is overflowing!!!You show how one can stand alone but can be so much more with the one who will love them with an intense love such as you have written about here!!! Thanks for sharing this piece!!~~Toni~~


    • Jadeheart 41
      March 24, 2007
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      Dear Toni, Thank you for the wonderful comment! It is much appreciated! Will return the favor soon my friend!


  • BillyClyde
    March 24, 2007
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    That's beautiful

    I could only imagine someone loving me like this!


    • Jadeheart 41
      March 24, 2007
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      Bob, Thank you as always for stopping by to read my work. I am no Pro but my words truly come from my heart. After all isn't that what poetry is all about? lol


  • JoyfulWriter
    March 24, 2007

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    Amazing!

    WOW! This is absolutely beautiful! I enjoyed this so much! The love shown here has been described so tenderly and so perfectly and comes straight from the deepest part of you. Thanks for sharing this amazing piece of poetry! Smiles, Terry


    • Jadeheart 41
      March 24, 2007
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      Ahh a comment from you my friend is always a blessing!! For your work is so admired by all!

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