My Angels sleeping in harmony
Watching them I forever Admire
Mother and Daughter held in love
A perfect picture they do inspire
Together embraced by a entwined dream
Sleeping forfilled in loves domain
A tender night they share together
This moment now seems so arcane
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Aww, the softer side of the Giant Monkey...
Beautifully done & so endearing in its sentiment & loving thoughts as to leave me touched in your words...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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Awwwww
This is a cute poem in so many ways!!! -
beautiful x
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Love it, it is very sweet and beautiful, I also read comments already on it and find the poem so much more powerful after readin the first comment made
Truely you penned a beautiful write, that has captured a wonderful moment.
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Unfinished?? Wow! Already this is so full of love and emotion..
Finish it if you like.. to me it already is complete!
Respect!
ps. I have three Angels myself. I know just what you mean..
Love
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Evert {o!-}
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Well, can't wait to read the final product! That sure is a sweet loving start!! I bet they look cute all snuggled up and asleep together.
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Hehehehe
Even when we are both snoring and drooling everywhere??? Then when Beth wakes up and starts whinging about having to go to her room, while I try not to stand in the cup of tea that I left to go cold, while I get up and stagger off to the bedroom......yes, yes, Im sure we look just like angels! lol
But seriously, it's a beautiful piece. Thankyou for being so biased that you still think we look cute when we blatantly dont! lol
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