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Your Always There For Me

When bad news hits my world a shatter
You ask what is the matter?
When I am happy  and glee
Your always their for me
When my mind is confused
Yours spirits bring a smile a new
When my inspiration is gone
Your my muse in the long run
When I am sad in tears
You hold me in your arms calming my fears
When I am lost in dope
You find all my hopes
When I loss my head again and again
You make sure I never turn to hard gin
When I needed you most
You were always there for me

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  • Poetrist
    August 19
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    This is a wonderful poem as well. In line 4 "their" should be "there". Awesome poem. I felt at ease.


  • coderre
    March 25, 2007
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    i feel tuched by it

    you dont do dope. i know you too well, but this peace made me feel very important to you amd we