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Keep It All Inside

i love you
do you see it
i hope you do
'cuz i really want you to

somtimes i wonder
what would happen if you knew
somtimes i think about
if you loved me too

what if you did
what if we could be together
listen up kid
but what about forever

can i hide this much longer
can you let your feelings out
can we live like this not knowing
what all this non-sence is about

i really want you to see
what i keep inside of me
could you tell me "i love you"
or is this all coming out too soon

i think this could work out
if we really tried
it wont work
if we keep it all inside

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  • LotsOfLove
    March 26, 2007
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    Very Good!

    I like this one a lot! - Mom