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the truth...

scars fade away,
memories die,
the truth is never true,
it always hides a lie.
friends don't know,
parents don't care,
no matter what you think,
no one will ever be there.
people like to hide things,
and say things that aren't true,
you say you want to know,
but i don't think you do.

Please tell me what you think

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  • eastbrook
    March 25, 2007
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    If scars do fade away, then I at least want that one on my thumb to last a really long time.


    • nobodys-girl
      March 25, 2007
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      aww derick your so sweet! if it doesnt ever fade you can't ever forget me ! yay!


  • halapalu
    March 25, 2007

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    I absolutely agree.

    this poem speaks the truth, even if it does hide a lie.

    thanks so much for your comment, by the way.

  • Red Soulja 187
    March 24, 2007
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    So True!! this poem is the truth