My dreams take me on a journey
Into an untouched magical realm
Dreaming is merely a portal
Neatly placed in our minds
I shall enter the lands of enchantment
Guided by a path of moon beams
Hovering with the stars above
Tonight I shall fly away with my dreams
Author notes
Form: ACROSTIC
A contest entry
- Short Lived Short Form #10 by Samplette.
425 points, ended March 24, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Acrostic poetry by SandraMVeinot.
408 points, ended May 14, 2007, 4 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful acrostic. "guided by a path of moon beams", fantastic wording. The imagery is wonderful, I felt as though I was there flying. Well done and good luck in the contest.
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A great acrostic. I love to dream. I have so much fun, most the time. Some times they are sad, but I do enjoy them for the most part. I like the imagery here. Thank you for entering. Nice job.
Sam
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