A noise flowing through your soul
Your ears bleeding, no way out
The screaming of this pain is never ending
You cant just stop it, get used to it
Its your heart crying out loud
Waiting for someone to get your wounds closed
Groaning inside your body, trembling all your bones
Flesh cracking up, your hands shaking
The reaper’s coming for you, you are just chained up
Leashes of melting silver, burning your skin
Your tongue is missing, no one will hear you
Skipping a few breathes, try not to choke yourself
Draining your blood of your body
Kicking you down to the floor, no escape
All you can do is disappear..
Don’t run away..
Just fade..
A contest entry
- I Want To Take A Peek Into Darkness... by poet2angels.
475 points, ended March 30, 2007, 18 entries
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Quite an intense write. I don't know that I found it too scary, but that is because I tend to read from a metaphorical perspective. Dark doesn't always equal scary. Sometimes it is just a matter of looking at things that arent so nice and finding a solution. We all have to do that at times.
I like the way you end the piece. For me, it was much like saying that running doesnt fix anything, yet adapting and figuring out how to step out of the way of those things that terrify us by facing them honestly without any candy coating.
It was a good read for me and it allowed me to find my own meaning within the words. That is always a nice touch.
Keep writing and again, welcome to AP
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Wow!
This one did scare me....The imagery is so vivid that I could almost see the person you describe and wish they could fade away to escapr the torture....
Awesone write!
TY for entering my contest!
Lynda
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I like this! Good work!
-Little Irish Poet -
Thanks a lot, i did my best to at least win something =]
still, its always good to write something scary
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