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Lover

Wake up to sweet sweat
rolling down his back
His legs entwined with mine
Trapped in his embrace
even in slumber his strenth is evident
Memories pass by, of the previous night
My first
My only...
Memories of heat
laughter
confusion
such sensious touches
that make it clear
of how much the words "I love you" can really mean
My friend
My lover
My passion...


My addiction

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  • Heavens Child
    March 24, 2007

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    Yes, love and is often an addiction for many of us humans. Many will be able to relate to your words. The imagery is fabulous. Great job on this piece. I love it.


  • hungermuncher
    March 24, 2007

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    this is a great right i love the way it makes me follow it in a weird way which is hard to explain it turns out lol keep writing j