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Wandering Eyes {THAN-BAUK}


Wandering eyes
With lust dying
Do cry in grief

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THAN-BAUK


A Than-Bauk, conventionally a witty saying or epigram, is a three line "climbing rhyme" poem of Burmese origin. Each line has four syllables. The rhyme is on the fourth syllable of the first line, the third syllable of the second line, and the second syllable of the third line.

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  • Spiritvision angel
    March 24, 2007
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    Fantastic write here with so much spoken in few words.


  • Samplette gold member
    March 24, 2007

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    You did a good job with this form. I enjoyed trying this form as well. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam