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The sun shine

The sun shining on all things,
during the morning sun light.
A new day it brings,
the sun shining on all things.

I hear a bird as it sings,
before it takes flight.
The sun shining on all things,
during the morning sun light.

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  • Samplette gold member
    March 24, 2007

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    A wonderfully written triolet. Very nicely done. I thank you very much for entering the contest. You did a great job.
    Sam