I am the sea to wave your need,
I am the breeze to blow the seed,
I am the sun to dry your tears,
I am the smile to stop your fears,
You are the rose I rest my touch,
You are the need I ache so much,
You are the woman my search to end,
You are my love, my life, my friend.
A contest entry
- AP Family - MEN only by PoeticEmily.
560 points, ended May 31, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Delicate with the undertones of a powerful love, need and heart. What a beautiful way to show someone that you care...
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Thankyou for the shiny cup Missy Faerie and the NIECE prize too.
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awwww
this is very sweet, I must say. This piece speaks as a husband to his wife, and as a father to his daughter. I'm not usually one for flowery sweetness, but this just made me smile
good job.
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I am glad that it made you smile Emily.
Because when I wrote it i wept.
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nice.
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Oh this is such a beautifully penned poem. I love the imagery and emotion stemming from your words. You have created a lovely picture. I like the rhyme and your flow was perfect. I really liked these lines a lot
"I am the sea to wave your need,
I am the breeze to blow the seed,"
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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God I would just die if someone wrote this to me. It's so beautiful, simple and full of loving emotions. This is just so sweet and out of the last three I have read one I just had to comment on. I love it.
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Thanks Atrina.
Yes first love no matter how young, is never forgotten.
And young love always the most honest and innocent,
And pure.
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Precious and Perfect
I adored this piece, with the graphic and the soul. Wonderful work as I have come to expect my friend. Just wonderful. ~Pamela
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Thanks Pamela!
Oh to be in innocence and not a care in the world, only the wonder of first love.
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Which came first, the picture or the poem??
Whichever it was,they are both beautiful. The two stanza compliment each other perfectly and the rhyming is immpecible.
A thoroughly enjoyable read, thanks......Sue
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The poem!
Came first i was inspired of course by love.
But when you think about it the most innocent thing in the world is true love.
So hence the picture to show the perfection within it.
Thank you for your kind comment.
Keith.
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Love the line you are the rose I rest my tough. Keith that is absolutely stunning and the picture is way too precious. stole my heart with this one. Wow! ~Sie
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No thief am I.
I to steal your heart?
I will keep it wrapped within a velvet box, until you have need of it.
Thank Sie!
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The picture is sooo cute...Your poem is sooo amazing and sweet. I love the way you did the stanzas, it fits very well. Great job!
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Thank you!
MMM i may try for the position of your A P father!
You sound cute too!
Keith
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