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Traveling Complex


If you’d wish for the moon
I’d pull it down for you, if only for a moment
And even when I don’t know what to do
My heart still sings…. for you
If you wish for the world
I’ll give you everything.
Nothing but the best for you
Nothing but the best for you

And I’ll dance one thousand slow dances with you
Just to be close to you

I’ll bring you with me wherever I go
But only if you’d want to, only if you’d want to
And I’ll take you where we can be free
But only if you’d want to, only if you’d want to be with me

I can’t explain this feeling inside
I’ve never felt so alive
And I believe you when you say
That you’ll never leave me

And I’ll dance once thousand slow dances with you
Just to be close to you
And I’ll fight one thousand fires just to get to you
No matter what life makes us go through
We’ll travel one million storms  together
Just to get through this, just to get through
This complex concoction created inside of us
And I won’t let go of you inside or out of it
Will you come with me when I say
When I say

I’ll bring you with me wherever I go
But only if you’d want to, only if you’d want to
And I’ll take you where we can be free
But only if you’d want to, only if you’d want to be with me
Only if you’d want to be with me
Then I’ll take you with me

Play me a song and I’ll write the words
And if you want more than, more than a love song
You will still have the tune
And my heart still sings for you

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  • CountryCousin
    March 29, 2007

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    I think.

    I think that you have written the words to the song and you wrote them so well. This made for an interesting read. I am glad that I clicked on it.


  • Loves wind
    March 26, 2007
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    this is really good! i like it. keep it up, good luck!

  • in-the-twilight
    March 24, 2007

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    This is absolutely beautiful and I greatly thank you for entering it into my contest! Wow! Good luck! ROck on! xoxo Meg