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Taken From The Night [part 2]

Confusion haunts her thoughts
As she slowly drifts away
On a float of wood and branches
The crescent in the darkened sky
Shines its light into the night
The cool water brings shivers
As her hand caresses its waves
The shadows cannot be seen tonight
For something terrible has occurred
To make the world turn black

Hell has finally come to Earth

And the Devil chose her

To be alone in this dungeon

Floating quietly, peacefully

In a never-ending stream
How did she get here?

The blood has crusted on her hands

Author notes

yay a part 2!
cause i liked Taken From The Night... there had to be a sequal.
still have no idea who the chick is, who she killed or what's going on. but it makes for more writing =]

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  • purplebubbles
    April 10, 2007

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    I totaly agree with the other two comments under me, sadistic!
    Sounded like a ritual at the end,something that i could see in a film. Dark and painful, though with an atom of fun in the air.
    Creative and nice, liked it =D


  • deathbyfrootloopsxx
    March 24, 2007

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    oooh. i'm intrigued.
    she sounds fun. probably slightly sadistic but still fun.
    =] you're pretty talented yourself.


    • CyanideSun
      March 24, 2007
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      =D

      yay sadistic *goes to dictionary.com to find out what it means*
      why thank you. this makes me very hungry