Seething beauty caught behind two sparkling eyes,
love intwined in her bones as simple as cotton candy on a stick.
Her thoughtful words and kind ideas stick to you,
brightening your day so very easily.
This amazing girl does not see her worth,
tucked away like a strand of hair behind an ear,
simply lingering in the backround, because she can not seem to find it.
But it covers her from head to toe,
wrapping around her fingers, her torso, her everything.
Twinkling beauty, enrapturing ideas flowing from simplistic pen.
Touching all around her, drawing them in,
beautiful inside and out,
is this amazing girl,
named Kari.
Author notes
boo! I'm sorry it's not that good love.
Writers block
I DID try though.
And I love you
A contest entry
- Thoughts for Another by GarbageCan.
2500 points, ended April 2, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I love her
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forgot the applause
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What an amazing tribute to our Kari she is a wonderful girl and means the world to many of us Thank you for this I am sure she will love it.
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aww! Thank you for liking it.
And thank you for the applauses.
And thank you for gold!
♥
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This is a great poem
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