About feelings,whenever I think
In the deep ocean of emotions ,I sink
How many feelings does a person have?
How many emotions which one person gave?
Some times smile while some times cry,
Some one,s hot while someone's dry
When I found some people very hard
My feelings made me angry from Lord
When I thought of people ,very kind
My feelings compell me to know what's behind
When I listened about people ,very moderate
My feelings asked why from someone, a person hate
At last I found the reason and the cause
What thing is behind it ,govern by which laws
Thats feelings of some one when hurt then hard
When benifited then soft and happy from Lord.
Author notes
This poem is very relkated to humans feelingd.It is some ones feelings and emotions which makes some one hard or soft.
A contest entry
- Choices!!!! Choices!!!!! Choices!!!!! by Errant Panther.
438 points, ended March 25, 2007, 33 entries
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this is an awsome poem....it can actually touch you from deep within ....its a good rhyming poem nd what else cn i say...i just like this one
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Beautiful...
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Very nice entry with a good rhyming structure. Please note in your author comment box which option this is for. Some editing might help as you have commas where you should have apostrophes < replace , with ' >. best wishes to you.
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hey where is the box of author comments box so that i can write about it.and how many choices u hav? -
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the author comments or author notes is where you had typed this "This poem is very relkated to humans feelingd.It is some ones feelings and emotions which makes some one hard or soft." contest is over now so never mind.
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