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[ I cherish every syllable ]

I cherish every syllable
    from feigning lips.
And I love the way
    tongues wrap
              round

                    each

                        passé
                            word

                  like they

              know

                them

                    by

                heart.


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  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    May 22, 2007
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    Delightful....

    This piece took me on a joyous ride....


  • Spider Mistress
    April 13, 2007
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    i love it. it made me smile.


  • Balldinger silver member
    April 5, 2007

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    with a lick of a wood splitter and the shmaltz of burled core, each syllable dances over the top of cliches like a vortex shave in a concupescent marvel. Street lights shimmer like forgotten novels, and words known by heart have become the blood stream of some other animal. I enjoyed every syllable of this poem - well done. ~ EZB

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