If I could write a love song
I would cut so deep
There would be no question left
But the grief keeps multiplying
So I smile and move on
Just want to write you a love song
Tear me away from this tempest
Bring me in from this cold
I think I have fallen in love
In love with this storm
It whips at my face
And leaves me blind
I'm not sure how
But I don't want to live
And I don't want to die
I've grown weary on my own
My company is too cheap
I think I could make you understand
If I could just write a love song
Please tell me what you think
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Sounds like the flip version of that song "Love Song" by i-don't-remember-who. Heh. Anyways, it's a beautiful poem.
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Three lines from the end should read "My company is TOO cheap", but the rest of it is quite good, really. But perhaps a little more structure wouldn't go amiss.
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Thanks I'm a twat and can never remember which 'to' goes where.
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Powerful...he's aching; i want to comfort him
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