this realization came at such a bad time
now i find myself wishing you were mine
Knowing that i shouldnt but these feelings are just too strong
how come i couldnt see this all along?
i should have seen that i liked you from the start
but i didnt until my relationship fell apart
and i respect the fact you gotta girl and i know you love her so
but still i just cant let these feelings go
what makes it worse is that i know i cant do shit
and really only you know how much i fuckin hate it
this crap is so confusing it's messing with my head
And it's crazy cuz i meant everything i said
Why did this happen and why did it happen now
i know i gotta wait this out but damn i dont know how
i really really like you and i'm sorry for this intrusion
i kinda know how you feel but this is my side of confusion
A contest entry
- Almost Anything Goes by bloodletter68.
300 points, ended March 13, 2008, 132 entries
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awww Kaila!!
things will be ok, in the end.
♥ Just keep your head up.
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awww hon, you'll be okay. don't worry,hearts reveal answers with time.
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thanx..hopefully things will work out
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you are very talented with words and rhymes. the structure of this is truly beautiful and easy to read.
on the subject side of things, I know exactly how you feel and it's just hard! it's like no matter what anybody says to you they cant make it any better, just be strong and I hope it all works out for you.
All the best
Falon
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I know how u feel on this one. It's hard, but u gotta wait it out. Hopefully it goes better for you than it did for me. Fate will work this out for you in the end. It just take patience that's all. On the poem critique this was a great poem and I loved your rhymes.I
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