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Call me your Baby Doll

Im that girl
With the inch thick make up
Masking the girl who bleeds for b e  a  u  t  y
As the blood p
          O
        O
    r’s        out
Of my [glitter.injected] veins
Cry into me you proms queens
Of your fakie little tears
The girl they know
And the girl I am
Are shattered glass
And {make.believe}

Im that girl
You'll whisper deadly secrets about
Because she’s to [fucked.up.perfectly]
And as the blood p
              O
            O
          R’s out
Of my carved up canvas wrist
{Mascara.stained.tears}
Will flow down onto
Your homophobic porcelain faces
Some one will love me one day
And we will laugh at your cheating lovers
As we kiss in public spaces.



Im that girl
With the [screaming silent secrets]
Call me you b a b y d o l l
Girl your everything ill ever want
And as the blood p
              O
            O
        R’s out
Ill dream deadly lies
Of us looking into each others eyes
They’ll never have to know
We’ll be each others (dirty.little.secret)
And never look back with regret.

Im that girl
And it will never be easy.

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  • genderideals--
    April 11, 2007

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    This is pretty good.
    But it's pours not poors. Poor would be not rich not something flowing.

    As the blood p
    O
    O
    r’s out
    Of my [glitter.injected] veins
    Cry into me you proms queens
    Of your fakie little tears
    The girl they know
    And the girl I am
    Are shattered glass
    And {make.believe}


    Fakie? Did you mean fake?

    But I loved the concept and other than that it was very nice. I'm going to give you one applause.


  • risewiththesmoke
    March 24, 2007
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    this is really good. congrats on the gold!!!


  • Dirty and Broken
    March 24, 2007
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    wow...i really like this one...