Our secret love affair
Lost inside eachothers eyes as "he" knows nothing of it
We make such a pair
And we both love it
We laugh behind his back
As we cuddle and in your bed lie next to eachother
So naive and so much that he lacks
He still doesnt know you have a secret lover
Neglecting him all the days of your "engagment"
We lose ourselves in a swirl of blankets
While he sits alone at home dorment
And we have the time of our lives and as he hasnt found out yet
I bet you wish you were me
I bet you'd wander how
I bet you she would be inclined to agree
And I bet you wish you payed more attention now
I hope you soon find out
I'll take so much pride in what I did
And I bet she will too no doubt
Openly straightforward and direct without secretiveness; candid
You know you interupt us when you call
Just leave us alone
She doesnt love you at all
And by the way, a good boyfriend would've known
A contest entry
- Secret Affairs...........At Least Check It Out! by Dorcha Runda.
410 points, ended April 4, 2007, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
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hahah... I'll keep you my dirty little secret.... lol. haha lovely write honey!! its a masterpiece!!
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I Love You
You know what that is so true he had no idea what was going on and he never stoped to think that maybe I had already let him go...But thats his problem now<3laney
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"Neglecting him all the days of your "engagment"
We lose ourselves in a swirl of blankets
While he sits alone at home dorment
And we have the time of our lives and as he hasnt found out yet" is my favorite part great write and good luck in the contest
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i like this. its so true. a good boyfriend would know if something wasn't right with his girl. i know mine didn't. thank you for your entry and good luck.
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This is really a good write. And I like the title a lot. Really nice job. I love your style.
Keep it up.
-Kate-
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this is awesome bro!
you have such talent.
This is vry true.
xox
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these are thoughts ive harbored before... not to say when.. but I can relate.... this is excellent
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