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Hypnotic Oblivion

They who hovered uncertain
            Faded
While hypnotic oblivion
        Waited for
A soft whisper in the dark

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  • Hadji Murad
    March 30, 2007
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    Now this is what I'm looking for! This is amazing. The imagery is astounding, the words left me breathless and overall this is such a fantastic piece. Everything about it is so beautiful and poignant and raw and lovely. Thank you for entering and best of luck!


  • layla.
    March 24, 2007
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    While hypnotic oblivion
    Waited for
    ----awesome imagery... good luck!
    ~bad resln