[Bang, Bang]
Can you hear the music?
[Bang, Bang]
She's listenin' to her records.
[Bang, Bang]
Her favorite is a love song,
a double-crush love.
She so in love
with the man of her dreams but,
there's this girl she knows
that secretly took her heart.
She's so confused
she doesn't know what to do.
So I guess she'll just settle
for the both of you.
[Bang, Bang]
Can you hear the music?
[Bang, Bang]
She's listenin' to her records.
[Bang, Bang]
Her favorite is a love song,
a double-crush love.
She's so in love
she's runnin' 'round in circles.
She just can't seem to get her mind
off of her.
But when he calls
she gets really nervous,
'cause she got her girl
holdin' up the circut.
And when she looks into both their eyes,
she can't help but to smile and slowly cry.
[Bang, Bang]
Can you hear the music?
[Bang, Bang]
She's listenin' to her records.
[Bang, Bang]
Her favorite is a love song,
a double-crush love.
[What, What]
Yeah, she looks cute and innocent.
[Hell yeah]
But she fell in an instant.
[Who, Who]
They know she really wants them,
when she calls...
[Bang, Bang]
Can you hear the music?
[Bang, Bang]
She's listenin' to her love mix.
[Bang, Bang]
She wants the world to slow down,
and wait for her move.
[Bang, Bang]
Can you hear the music?
[Bang, Bang]
She's listenin' to this new one.
[Bang, Bang]
About her two secret lovers,
and her fall.
[Bang, Bang]
Can you hear the music?
[Bang, Bang]
She's listenin' to her records.
[Bang, Bang]
Her favorite is a love song,
a double-crush love.
Author notes
Wrote this for a friend... its pretty kewl, I put music to it and stuff...
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice!
nice write, i tried to jam it with the girlfriend beat, but um.. doesnt quite work here! as a poem-song, its fantastic, amusing and charming.. but i dont think it fits as this doesnt have the same beat, according to me.. but u r a great writer as i can see from this poem, so i would love it if you try and manage something else, because am sorry that though this is a fantastic write, it doesnt fit the bill! i ll be looking forward to another of you..Thanx a lot for entering, Best of luck in this contest...Lots and lots of love and cheers, shuvi

