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Time (updated)

Your heart goes along with time,
Beat for beat, chime for chime.
Every moment that passes by
You wish you get up and fly.

Sands of time fall on the ground
Life’s memories weigh up pound by pound
Tick tock, Tick tock, Tick tock
Whisper the hands among the clock

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  • Raining Kisses silver member
    May 24

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    This has a wonderful feel to it, and it kind of drags you into it
    I enjoyed it a lot
    Thanks


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    March 24, 2007

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    Perfectly said ... Powerful & Amazing

    Stay safe
    ~Amanda


  • Kleyda14
    March 23, 2007

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    Small but so Powerful

    It has so much meaning in it and I loved it. "Life's memories weigh up pound by pound" they really do. Excellent poem.