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X- Ray Vision

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You keep telling me
that you love me,
but I swear
I just can't see it.
I've strained my eyes
till they're crossed ,
and blurred
still I just can't see it.
My guess is I'll be needing
x-ray vision to see ,
that there really is a heart
beating in your chest.
So ,
I'm taking you down
to the doctors.
To get one of those
new fangled tests,
that I read about
in the "Daily News".



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  • Tefnut
    March 24, 2007

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    Good

    I realy liked this
    espeacially your use of the words new fangled
    which my peers don't get.
    this was sweet and funny.