I'm not going to tell her
That it's my last day
I'm just going to hold her
In that special way
Then I'm going to kiss her
From the bottom of my heart
Tell her that I miss her
Whenever were apart
Then I'm going to hold her hand
Watch our last sunset
We'll leave our footprints in the sand
I havn't told her yet
And when we lay down for the night
I will give her all of me
In hope that I did it right
It's her last memory
A contest entry
- ~~If you knew today was your last day on earth how would you spend it?~~ by Sweetangelgrace.
475 points, ended April 5, 2007, 13 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Gosh, you write with such tenderness. This is really beautiful and it makes you think ... of all kinds of things. Stunning.
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Filled with Tears.
I'm still cry'n. It's beautiful. -
This is a great poem you wrote here, filled with love for the one your heart desires for. Well done and best of luck in the contest
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Bluecollar this is a lovley poem you penned here for your sweet love I am sure she will appreciate this poem you written for her. Your rhythm and rhyme flowed beautifully throughout the entire poem. Well done and good luck in the contest
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A great job with R&R my friend
Very well done
Raker -
It straight touched my heart!!!
It was an excellent poem and as I read it, it seemed to be like someone was whispering it in my ear. It flows nicely, and the reader becomes consumed by emotion as they read it. It was amazing!
Thanks for entering my contest!
~~GRACE~~
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