The choice that was so hard to make,
The choice that changed me
Forever
I ran away and I lied
I did things that are unspeakable,
Yet I still live.
I go through each day with a regret, a regret which tortures me
That fills me like a sweeping tidal wave
Engulfing me, drowning me
Screaming for mercy does nothing
Old scars of pain, new scars of regret
It is pure torture trying to live
If I could end it I would
Everyday is a torture
For which I am forced to live
Please tell me what you think
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Nicely said! We have all done things of regret, we all go on for reasons we may not understand at moment, but do with time. We live because we still have things to do, learn and see. We live to love and be loved. Life is an adventure and sometime rockie but we are strong and make it.
Mistakes are to be learned from and move on. Many more shall come your way.
Hold to your believes and live!
You could change a life some day.
Great write of thoughts and feelings, good flow.
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this is something i think everyone feel, but you know there is a reason why we continue to live, it is so we see beyond the torture, keep it flowing
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Everyday is a torture
For which I am forced to live---- I feel exactly like that, but I am never physically abused. This is a strong poem. VEry well expressed.
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Well written the flow made it an easy read and it lead to the sad image. Not a happy poem but certainly well composed.
Love,
Amera
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Ooh. This is very dark. Great imagery of the wave of regret drowning you. I love "Old scars of pain, new scars of regret." Nice job.
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