Charcoal
Dark
Abscence
Black is me
Empy hollow
Feeling free
Beautiful lanky dress
Black is far from innocent
Lines the eyes
Emphasis of beauty
But what is it truly?
THe unknown is only
What is shown
Hiding in the hollows
Of one's eyes
All around the world
Black is a lie..
But isn't beauty simply
To fool the mind
Black is beautiful
Beautiful is this..
A contest entry
- Why do you love the color Black? by Lj-.
350 points, ended March 24, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Welcome to Allpoetry
A good example of your personal reasons for loving the color black. The title of your poem by way of a question is a good one for getting the interest of your reader... you have bought your poem to a good conclusion by explaining black is beautiful.
Well done, I do encourage you to keep up with your writing, welcome to allpoetry, check out all the site has to offer and do not hesitate to ask if you need help from any allpoetry greeter who will be happy to assist you
~Katie~
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Very interesting take on black.
Nicely done.
Thank you for entering,
Good luck!
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Profound
Black is truly such a beautiful enigma...
"Black is a lie" about sums it up for me. The starting is bold and stark. Well written! Good luck in the contest!
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