She smiles when she sees him
She closes her eyes
She knows he sees her dying inside
"I love you," he says, as he gives her a hug
A life full of many battles lost, and very few won
"Why must you do this?" he whispers in her ear
he grabs her arm, he says "look here"
Her scars appear...
a tear falls
Im not strong enough to go on..i don't want to...my soul is long gone.
My heart has been broken, my emotions played
please don't make me fight through another day
"But your all i have left," he says as he falls to the ground...without a sound
His life full of burden, happiness yet to be found
Please tell me what you think
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Very Good
I like this poem alot I hope you enjoyed reading my poetry yesterday thank you.
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very nice !!
this is a great poem. short but I really LOVED it..
Also about your comment thanks for tellin' me that. I wasnt sure at first... about the "I sit here"
really all that was, was a poem i tried to improve that I had written a while back. thanks for your adivce. AWESOME poem.
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