I am flying first class to Heaven on a one way ticket
I can't complain the service is exquisite
I am on my way I can't sit still
I can't begin to describe just how I feel
What will it be like? Who will I see?
Will Jesus be standing there to greet me?
I hear the heavenly angels singing a beautiful song
I know I'm getting closer it won't be long
In the horizon I see a bright light
This is the most glorious sight
My plane is landing soon I'll head out the door
To walk in peace and tranquillity on Heaven's golden shore
A contest entry
- Titles For Everyone!!! by AllYoullNeverHave.
450 points, ended April 13, 2007, 23 entries
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Comments
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I would even settle for coach LOL. This is great. You provide great imagery and you leave the reader feeling your passion and ache of that day when we are Heaven bound!
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great analogy here. i think you left out the word one in the first line. this is a beautiful write of a wonderful trip that i will be taking also. thank you for sharing this. God bless you always
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Nice job! Very interesting twist on the title. I love the analogy between flying and going to heaven. Great job. Thanks for entering. Good luck.
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