Does he cry,
Is there something that cuts him,
Making tears fall.
I'm not really sure,
To be honest I don't think so.
Maybe when he fell from Heaven,
Maybe then 'cause he'd been taken from Paradise.
Or maybe he does,
When he loses a battle,
In the War that has been going on,
Since the beginning of time.
Maybe just maybe.
I really don't know if he cries,
There is always that possiblity,
But I think that the tears we should think about,
The ones we should feel bad for because we caused them,
Are the ones shed by our Lord and Savior.
He's the one that has always loved us,
That cries when we turn our backs on him.
He'll always be there,
Wanting and loving us,
So the tears He sheds our the ones we need to,
We need to honestly and truly care and feel remorse about.
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Written in the topic of Devils Tears in the Freewrite section.
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Hoorah, Jesus!
Good job, good job! We do need to think of what we are doing and if it's right in the Lord's eyes. After all, Christ died for us, the least we can do is live for him!
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Very nice!
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God philosphy is it reciprocity
God has shed all of his tears for his creation has run wild, man has turned to beast and the almighty burden called the king of beasts has been unleashed.
Mankind will fall, all you have to do is know that we are doomed for all living things must die.
Great poem indeed, I like it so.
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Great Job Again
This is a beautifully written poem that really gets the reader to think about the words. This is very philosophical and it makes you think about life in general. A very nice write.
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