you were always my [techno.lover.rock.god]
...eros with glitter-cased tinkerbell wings
([liar])
getting me all fucked up
on pheromones and
a closet full of sex toys
slurring fairy tales out of 3am lips
throwing starstruck moon
into my eyes
calling me pixiebabygirl, kissing
g l i t t e r[glimmer&&glamour] down my throat
with every protest i swallowed with cigarette smoke
smeared on
r e d p l a stic.cups
and frosting, sprinkled
with snow white biting her lips until they *bled*
poisonapples
chemical lovetrips smeared between our
thighs(eyes)
...and i wanted to keep you, keep dancing to the beat
between our sweat-stained
s
h
e
e
t
s
||PAUSING||
to inhale paper-encased love
(and goodwill)
hangover hickeys
&&sweetlittlelovebites
later
i let the vodka (vomit) you out
draining myself of your toxic influence
whispering the prophecies
threaded in the songs on your /mix\tape
and in the prisonxcell of your
smile.
Author notes
i haven't written like this in ages.
i'm feeling teenage.
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I really dig this poem, despite the fact that I'm usually not the biggest fan of poems that do weird things with the words like that, you know, going all diagonal and such.
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Sometimes we have to feel teenage
"and i wanted to keep you, keep dancing to the beat
between our sweat-stained
s
h
e
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s"
--worded, flowed, and had a rhyme to it, very well. I liked the addition of the musical bits here and there (mainly beginning and ending). There's something about it that makes me go "oh yeah". A nicely written piece.
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sort of teenager-ish... but lovely :]
.:Marie:.
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I a very teenage-ish write, ture...*noids head*
But I liked the structure more.
~bad resln -
♥
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Ace xxx
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