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the greatest

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this one is from the heart
naz, i respect your golden courage
to boldly somersault into the ring
you are a brave, tricky wren
i look up to your superior skill
and your discipline is a wonder
leopard-skin shorts and bright blue gloves
i love the spark
you brought to
the sport of boxing
i prize your trophies
that you won, so enthusiastically
for britain and the yemen
you put yourself on a pedestal
you are perfectly supreme
my sporting hero
we love,
idolize,
and applaud you
you are the people's friend
world champion
blessed by the angels
and the very best i've ever seen

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  • BellaD
    April 5, 2008
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    A very good write though I don't follow boxing! Well done and thank you so much for your entry.


  • Poetdontknowit
    March 24, 2007

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    NICELY DONE

    A perfect piece for the contest. You have such a great way with vocabulary. I like it!!!!!!!
    POETDONTKNOWIT

  • Kay Laon Anders
    March 23, 2007
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    Very Nice

    Beautiful and splendid...well thought out and expressed...

    KAY