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passion in your veins.

there's fire
in your veins, and
i can feel it when we touch

fingertips ablaze with
the passion that can't be caught
in polaroids;
in that camera you carry
obsessively

lips that twist around
the words of songs, whispering
tunelessly (noiselessly) to
divine intervention, and
all the songs we love to hate,
love to scream, love to
lose ourselves
in.

there's fire
in your veins
i wish you'd set
it free.

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yeah, I... I don't know.

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  • love tank x
    April 6, 2007
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    "fingertips ablaze with
    the passion that can't be caught
    in polaroids;"

    Wonderfulll<3

  • Aurora Ceres
    April 4, 2007
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    You have such amazing talent! Never ceases to amaze me. With this you, I am sure, wrote with a very specific purpose yet the reader can take anything away form it. I don't know about whom this is written but may I echo your words
    "there's fire
    in your veins
    i wish you'd set
    it free."


  • sweetpearl
    March 27, 2007

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    Are you talking about me? Just kidding. Camera obsessed and music nonsense ... fiery veins and all. This is wonderful, it truly is. You deserve a star. No, an entire constellation.


    • ohemeegeeay
      March 28, 2007
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      thanks sweets =]

      i'll place them in my midnight sky and make a thousand wishes.

      megg♥♥


  • FlyingXDaggers
    March 24, 2007

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    you may not know but i do, this is a wonderful and passionate poem about your special someone, wonderful and good luck in the contest


  • noir eyes
    March 24, 2007

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    fingertips ablaze with
    the passion that can't be caught
    in polaroids;
    in that camera you carry
    obsessively


    this was so pretty, babe. im jealous =p


  • Amicus2K9
    March 23, 2007

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    A Good One!

    Fire in the veins, Hot Blooded, soul on fire and you are playing with all of them. And your last line..."I wish you'd set it free..." is just perfect.

    Saying without saying, implying many things, leaving the reader to create and visualize or imagine just what you might have in mind...and what if makes the reader think/feel.

    Well done, again.

    amicus...


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