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Clouded Chaos

Missing image
When will it end
I’m tired
How long
The sadness
Never ending

Clouded chaos
All around
Make it stop
I want off

No madness
No more sadness
I need a new tomorrow
Drowning in sweet sorrow

Captain of this hell
Keeping me locked in this small cell
Laughing at the blood red tears
Seeping from your deepest fear

~vampy~

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  • owlishhunter
    March 27, 2007

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    A great write, my friend, as always :-) We get better every day...with effort. hold your head high


  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    March 24, 2007

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    this was an interesting write. I'm still a little tired from the party last night but I'm almost recovered., keep up the great work.


  • goddesskevauna
    March 24, 2007

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    Ooooh! Nice one, sis. Yeah, me too. I wanna get off this ride and on to a new one. I'm getting way too dizzy here.