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Dreams

I can dream weird dreams,

that you see in my eyes,

through my disguise,

I take you for a fly,

see the stars up high.

 

See just life going by,

like clockwork society,

an exhibition of being.

 

As we sail through the galaxy,

all we'll see,

what I see,

will flabbergast me.

 

When I come home,

that's when I'm alone.

 

They say I'm to blame,

for they think I'm insane.

I don't care for what they say,

or the games they play.

Hatred is the devils game,

jealousy is its name.

 

I can dream some dreams,

I can see elegance,

everone's happy & has love.

It's just not like that.

 

As we sail through the galaxy,

all we see,

what I see,

will flabbergast me.

 

When I come home,

that's when I'm alone.

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  • k2vet
    April 13, 2007
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    good poem. clever take like the use of rhyme


  • JoyfulWriter
    March 23, 2007

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    An amazing piece here with rhyme so perfectly spaced...a really great poem to read...certainly gave me such wonderful visions...smiles, Terry


  • xoxhanniexox
    March 23, 2007
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    This was really good, these lines are my favorite:

    "See just life going by,
    like clockwork society,
    an exhibition of being."

    Very pretty, nice flow, reads sort of like lyrics.. Thanks for the entry!

    xoxo